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Puella Magi Twilight Sparkle by Ptepix Puella Magi Twilight Sparkle by Ptepix
Twilight Sparkle is a magic girl! Her cosplay happens to be a wizard o.O

This took me forever....I am slow at anthros....so yeah.



I am thinking about doing a picture with all of the mane six as magic girls! :iconkyubeyplz::iconsays3plz:Give me your soul nyah?
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:icondashermkii:
First time writing one of these, OK!

So first of all you did a great job on the legs and arms; with the exception that the arms seem to be carrying the staff in a unnatural way. Don't get me wrong the arms are the right size and bending in ways that they can it just seems that it would be very uncomfortable to carry it in that way.

You also did a great job on the wind it makes the whole thing look a lot more epic. Like she just finished a battle or something.

the horn seems a little bit small and sharp but not way to much so. The ears are a bit big they appear to be over 1/4 the size of her entire face. Ponies do have larges ears, but I think its a bit much.

The background is very nice and so is the foreground; however the... mid ground? the background that is brown seems without feature compared to the other two. I would just add some shape and shadows to it and it will be perfect!

Lastly the um... well.... Gosh dang this part is awkward to talk about... The breast seem a bit to low on her body.

Anyways I hope that helps!
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:icondragonsanddreamscape:
DragonsAndDreamscape Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Professional General Artist
Wow! This is incredible! I seriously love the effects!
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:iconptepix:
Ptepix Featured By Owner May 23, 2013   Digital Artist
Thanks it took forever XD
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:icondragonsanddreamscape:
DragonsAndDreamscape Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Professional General Artist
I can imagine!
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:iconptepix:
Ptepix Featured By Owner May 23, 2013   Digital Artist
XP ded
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TwilightIsMagic Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Twilight is most magical pony ever, even when she's not a pony.
And no matter her outfit or even shape, with certain limitations, I still love it.
Those strands of hair in front look great, and the mane and tail are quite beautiful. Well done.
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Ptepix Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   Digital Artist
Thank you ^__^
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Sherbet-Boo Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Student Artist
I love this so much!! It's too good for words! :3 And the effects around the staff are amazing! So glowy!

<3 Twilight, although I think her horn could be a tad longer.
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Ptepix Featured By Owner May 8, 2013   Digital Artist
Thank you ^_^

It probably could have been longer XD
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Sherbet-Boo Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Student Artist
Welcomes! ^-^

And just a tad is all.
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Ptepix Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   Digital Artist
Yee...I need to learn some more anatomy....mebbeh have more people critique it first before spending hours making the lines perfect and coloring it....Apparently different parts are off
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